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-== Questions on "Hero" and "The Passage" ==
-Thanks for editing the questions I added -- your shortened wording is much clearer and better. [[User:Ka-Ping Yee|Ka-Ping Yee]] 03:18, 13 February 2008 (CST)
-:No problem. With the "Hero" question is was not so much length but tense. "The Passage" strayed somewhat into analysis with the elaboration. Usually questions should be one to two short sentences. I could have moved it upwards, but even shortened the point still gets across. -- [[User:Serenity|Serenity]] 04:48, 13 February 2008 (CST)